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Bathe the Streets by Brieana Bathe the Streets by Brieana
something I came up with earlier today. Enjoy :)
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"And the Streets Will Run Red With Your Blood." Or I might suggest "I Will Paint the Streets Red with Your Blood." I would stay away from passive words like "want" and "like." Instead go with action words such as "will" and "is." So the slug line could be, "I will paint the town red tonight...with your blood!" I like all the blood spattering and the bold font type, which I think is completely appropriate. Might be a more enticing title as "I Shall Bathe the Streets Red with His/Her Blood." That's not as threatening to the reader. Anyhow I think it is a great effort and you may have a future as a book cover designer, if you aren't already doing that.
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Well that is a rather strong and powerful way to use words. Personally I like that you said 'I want to' it makes it a lot more personal.
The line "it's like painting the town red, but with your corpse" actually put a little smile on my face, simply because it sounds so 'nice' at the start and then turns grim again.
I also like the way you did the blood splatters, though the blood would actually be a little darker, but that's a secondary thing. The red is still a very nice contrast against the black and brings out the writing even more.
Very eye catching to say the least.
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Gerbiltastic Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
These Make me happy. The world will end with not a whimper. But with a Bang!
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Brieana Apr 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
:) right right!
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SeersSword Apr 17, 2012   General Artist
How I feel about Joseph Kony..... :rofl:
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Brieana Apr 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
XD! Good one lol
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SeersSword Apr 17, 2012   General Artist
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Indeedy!
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Brieana Apr 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks, glad you like it!
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Brieana Apr 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank ya! haha just came up with it randomly one day :)
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